1 City Life
More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
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Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.
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The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. Another issue is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems such as high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.
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However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from city centres and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for example, the introduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the traffic problem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.
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In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
(273 words, band 9)
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | metroplis | a large and densely populated urban area | ||
2 | the average inhabitant | citizens, residents, dwellers | ||
3 | The main problem for sb | idea | ||
4 | pay higher prices for | housing, transport, and even food | ||
5 | suffer from social problems | social problems: high crime and poverty rate | ||
6 | in comparison with | compared with | ||
7 | pollution from traffic | |||
8 | overcrowded | the streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded | ||
9 | unhealthy and stressful | |||
10 | the building of affordable or social housing | to reduce the cost of living | idea | |
11 | politicians | a leader engaged in civil administration | ||
12 | ban .. from .. and promote the use of .. | idea | ||
13 | help to | (public transport) reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion | Explaination | |
14 | the introduction of a congestion charge for sb | Example | ||
15 | to curb the … problem | mitigate the problem | ||
16 | provincial towns and rural areas | suburban areas | ||
17 | regions | by moving industry and jobs to those regions | ||
18 | the pressure on .. | in order to reduce the pressure on major cities | ||
19 | implement | implement a range of measures | conclusion |
Main points:
Structure | Main points |
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Paragraph 2 | (1) The main problems for …. is that the cost of living (high) |
(2)Another issue is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems | |
(3)the air quality in cities is often poor | |
Results: city life can be unhealthy and stressful. | |
Paragraph 3 | variour steps tha goverments could take to tackle these problems |
(1)invest $ in the building of affordable or social housing to ↓ the cost of living | |
(2)politicians have the power to ban ….from… & promote the use of .. | |
(3) to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving… to those regions. |
2 Live alone
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
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The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.
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However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.
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In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
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No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | far more normal for | it is not uncommon that | ||
2 | one-person households | the rise in one-person households(+) | ideas | |
3 | + for both personal and broader economic reasons | the rise in … can be seen as (+/- adj) for both ~ | ||
4 | On an individual level | as for individuals | ||
5 | more independent & self-reliant | |||
6 | live alone <> live with family memebers | |||
7 | valuable life skills | cook, clean, pay bills and manager his or her budget | ||
8 | can certainly be seen as a positive development | a/an ↑ in the # of … ~ | ||
9 | From an economic perspective, | from the financial point of view, | ||
10 | the trend towards living alone | towards doing | ||
11 | greater demand for housing | the trend will result in ~ | ideas | |
12 | This is likely to benefit …. | ~ the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies … | ||
13 | a host of other companies | ~ that rely on homeowners to buy.. | ||
14 | homeowners | |||
15 | arguments given above | However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be .. | Topic Sentence(Not in Para 2) | |
16 | rather than…,(start a sentence) | rather than the + feeling of increased independence, …..(sentence) | ideas | |
17 | the positive feeling of increased independence | the sense of achievement, the sense of fulfillment | ||
18 | negative feelings | feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry | ||
19 | missing out on (*) | They ~ the emotional support and daily conversation | ||
20 | bear the weight of .. | they must ~ all household bills and responsibilities | ||
21 | in this sense, | in this way, | ||
22 | perhaps(start a sentence) | |||
23 | push up … prices | a rise in demand(*) for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents | ||
24 | the general population, | the public, the average inhabitant,citizens, residents, dwellers | ||
25 | sb will be faced with | |||
26 | have both beneficial & detrimental effects on | have both beneficial & detrimental effects on … |
Main points:
Structure | Main points |
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Paragraph 2 | (TS) the rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. |
(1) pp who choose to live alone my become more independent and self-reliant than those who … | |
(2) the trends towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. | |
Paragraph 3 | (TS) the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. |
(1) Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry | |
(2) Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand(*) for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. |
3 Food Safety
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food we eat today.
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Food safety has been cited amply in recent press accounts. Although people today have more food choices than those in the past, from my perspective, it does not necessaryily mean that the food we eat today is healthier than the food we eat in the past.
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First of all, food industry is increasingly commercialized and businessmen do not really care about the food quality when they are devoted to make profits. What makes it worse is that some mercenary food producers adulterate foods without informing the buyers. For example notorious melamine incident poisoned quite a few innocent children, which made the society bristle with anger.
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In addition, the pace of live has been accelerated, and most people eat fast food for saving time, and this choice is harmful to health in a long run. Especially for the young people who are struggling in big cities full of tension every day, a reasonable breakfast seems a luxury to them. Although having fast food saves their time, over time, the bad eating habits will eventually do harm to their health.
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Last but not least, there is a wide variety of food choice in contemporary world, and people have easy access to high-fat or high-calorie food which results in obesity. Most obviously, many people now are so bewildered by the overwhelming advertisement of food that they cannot tell between the healthy food and the junk food. As a result, many of them are suffering various health problems due to their intemperance in their diets.
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In conclusion, it is true that the recipe becomes more scientific and healthy today but for the apparent reasons discussed above, the food we eat today is unhealthier than thos we eat in the past.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | has been cited amply | Food safety has been cited amply in recent press accounts. | Background Information(BI) | |
2 | it does not necessaryily mean that | |||
3 | xxx industry is increasingly commercialized | - | ||
4 | are devoted to | businessmen … when they are devoted to make profits | ||
5 | what makes it worse is (new sentence) | |||
6 | mercenary (adj) | profit oriented [mercenary food producers, a mercenary enterprise] | ||
7 | adulterate | mixed with impurities [food or drink is adulterated] | ||
8 | notorious melamine incident | 三聚氰胺事件 | ||
9 | quite a few | quite a lot (1 2); quite a few(1), quite a little (2) quite a bit of(2) | ||
10 | make sb bristle with anger | bristle: a stiff hair | ||
11 | accelerated & saving time | the pace of live has been accelerated, and most people eat fast food for saving time | BI & ideas | |
12 | in a long run | in a long term | ||
13 | Especially for sb who …, (sentence) | Example | ||
14 | a reasonable breakfast | ~ seems a luxury to them | ||
15 | seems + n | be often seen as a luxury to them | ||
16 | doing sth(subject) | Having fast food saves their time | ||
17 | over time, | 有朝一日. | ||
18 | overtime (adj, adv) | I have to work overtime | ||
19 | will eventually do harm to | be harmful to sb | ||
20 | a wide variety of xxx choice | a wide variety of food choice | ||
21 | contemporary | in contemporary world | ||
22 | have easy access to | have [no, less, more …] access to | ||
23 | high-fat or high calorie food | which results in obesity | ||
24 | Health problems | obesity, high blood pressure, adult-onset diabetes, heart disease[cardiopathy], arthritis | ||
25 | pp now are so bewildered by … | bewilder(vt):cause to be confused emotionally | ||
26 | the overwhelming advertisement of … | pp now are so bewildered by ~ | ||
27 | tell between | advertisement cannot ~ the healthy food and the junk food. | ||
28 | intemperance | in passion or indulgence | ||
29 | be suffering | many of them are suffering various health problems due to their intermperance in their diets | ||
30 | recipe | the ~ becomes more scientific and healthy | ||
31 | apparent reasons discussed above | |||
32 | Hygiene conditions |
1: countable noun & 2: uncountable noun
Brainstorming
Position/Attitude | Ideas |
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Agree | |
1. Food industry is increasingly commercialized and businessmen do not really care about the food quality when they are devoted to make profits. | |
2. The pace of life has been accelerated, and most people eat fast food for saving time, and this choice is harmful to health in a long run. | |
3. There is a wide variety of food choice in contemporary world, and people have easy access to high-fat or high-calorie food which results in obesity. | |
Disagree | |
1. The recipe becomes more scientific and healty. | |
2. Hygiene conditions in food industry has been improved. | |
3. People have a strong sense of being healthy and care about the food choice. |
4 Tech make our life simply OR complicated
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology designed to make our life simply actually makes our life more complicated.
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Along with the rapid boom of innovation, advanced technology has made our life simpler. However, its counterproductive effect which gives us miseries can also not be neglected.
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Firstly, facing the computers everyday has involved many people into great pressure. It is because most of our offices have been largely computerized. Long time staring at the screen and fixed in an eternal position, people have been struck by various diseases such as backaches. To make it worse, a lot of stress is accumulated on a psychological level, which may give rise to mental problems, making us unhappy and sick.
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Secondly, cell phones are reducing the quality of relationship among people. Undoubtedly, the emergence of cell phone has greatly facilitated people’s life, whereas the convenience comes with a huge price. It can be explained on two folds. For one thing, the intimacy of face-to-face conversation is replaced by the cold voice in the microphone. For another, when we want to have a discussion of serious issues, using cell phone is always inefficient.
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Finally, the popularization of private cars has caused many urban problems. With more cars on the street comes growing traffic congestion, which is a modern plague in almost every major city. Apart from that, the tail gas of cars has directly led to the serious air pollution. Moreover, the non-restriction of driving cars is becoming an increasingly big challenge to car owners.
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To sum up, as we depend too much on technology to enjoy convenience, our life will be mad more complicated by a lot of stresses and problems related to technology.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | along with | Along with the rapid boom of innovation, | BI | Tech (10%) |
2 | counterproductive effect | counterproductive effect which gives us miseries | ||
3 | computerized | offices have been largely computerized | ||
4 | be neglected | can also not be neglected | ||
5 | involve sb into pressure | doing sth has involved … into great pressure | Idea | |
6 | long time doing sth, | |||
7 | has/have been struck by diseases | |||
8 | backaches | has/have been struck by backaches | ||
9 | be accumulated on a psychological level, | |||
10 | give rise to | result in | 90% | |
11 | reduce the quality of relationship | cell phones are reducing the quality of relationship among people. | Idea | |
12 | the emergence of xxx | ~ of cell phone has greatly facilitated people’s life | Subject | |
13 | sth comes with a huge price | wheras the convenience commes with a huge price | ||
14 | can be explained on two folds | in two different ways | TS | |
15 | the intimacy of conversation | [intimacy]the state of having a close personal relationship with somebody [<>cold voice] | Family, Social, Tech | |
16 | the popularization of xxx | |||
17 | with more cars on the street | [The Emphatic Pattern] with more cars on the street comes growing traffic congestion | Example/Explaination | |
18 | plague | |||
19 | the tail gas | the tail gas of cars has directly led to the serious air pollution. | ||
20 | the non-restriction of driving cars | |||
21 | an increasingly big challenge to | the non-restriction of driving cars is becoming an increasingly big challenge to car owners. |
Position/Attitude | Ideas |
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Main boday 1 | Using computers tends to make us more stressful |
1. The modern workplace has been largely computerized | |
2. People who use computers everyday have health problems. | |
A lot of stress is accumulated on a psychological level. | |
Main Body 2 | Cell phones reduce the quality of human relationship |
1. The convenience of cell phone comes with a huge price. | |
2. THe intimacy of face-to-face conversation is lost. | |
3. Discussion of serious issues over cell phone is inefficient | |
Main Body 3 | Private cars have created many urban problems |
1. Traffic jam is a modern plague in every major city. | |
2. Serious air pollution is a direct result of auto emissions. | |
3. Parking presents a greater challenge to car owners. |
# 5 University Subjects
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.
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There are various reasons why people believe that universities should only offer subjects that will be useful in the future. They may assert that university courses like medicine, engineering and information technology are more likely to be beneficial than certain art degrees. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these courses provide more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them. On the social level, by forcing people to choose particular university subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered. Finally, a focus on technology in higher education could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity.
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In spite of these arguments, I believe that university students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. In my opinion, society will benefit more if our students are passionate about what they are learning. Besides, nobody can really predict which areas of knowledge will be most useful to society in the future, and it may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical or technical skills. If this were the case, perhaps we would need more students of art, history and philosophy than of science or technology.
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In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to study whatever they like.
(297 words, band 9)
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | with regard to | about/related to | ||
2 | be forced into | it would be better for students to ~ certain key subject areas. | ||
3 | There are various reasons whay .. | TS | ||
4 | medicine, engineering and information technology | ~ are more likely to be beneficial than certain art degrees. | ||
5 | job opportunities, career progression, better salaries | ~, and therefore an improved quality of life for students | ||
6 | gaps are covered | any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered. | ||
7 | a focus on xx | ~ in higher education could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity | ||
8 | inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity | |||
9 | preferred | students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. | ||
10 | benefit | xxx will benefit more if … | ||
11 | be passionate about | |||
12 | value xxx above | it may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical or technical skills. | ||
13 | If this were the case, | |||
14 | perhaps | ~ we would need … | ||
15 | student of art | more students of art, history and philosophy than of science or technology. | ||
16 | sensible | it might seem sensible for uni(s) to focus only on … |
Position/Attitude | Ideas |
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Main Body 1 | There are various reasons why people believe that uni(s) should only offer subjects .. |
1. From a personal perspective, more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life | |
2. On the social level, by forcing pp to choose …, gov can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps are covered | |
3. Finally, a focus on tech in higher edu could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity. | |
Main Body 2 | In spite of these arguments, students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. |
1. Society will benefit more if our students are passionate about what they are learning. | |
2. Besides, nobody can really predict which areas of knowledge will be most usefull to society in the future. |
6 Game
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
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Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
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On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.
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However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.
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In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.
(258 words, band 9)
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | harmless fun | some pp regard video games as harmless fun | ||
2 | adverse effect on | xxx is/are having an adverse effect on | ||
3 | enjoy doing | Many pp, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. | ||
4 | entertaining and educational | xxx can be both entertaining and educational. | ||
5 | virtual worlds | sb are transported into virtual worlds | ||
6 | exciting and engaging | video games are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes | ||
7 | useful skills outside the gaming context | imagination and creativity, as well as centration, logical thinking and problem solving | ||
8 | it has been shown that | |||
9 | computer simulation games | ~ can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane | ||
10 | are outweighed by | these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. | TS | |
11 | highly addictive | Gaming can be highly addictive | ||
12 | scores, new targets and frequent rewards | users are constantly given ~ to keep them playing | ||
13 | progress through | Many children now spend hours each day trying to ~ the levels of a game or to get higher score than their friends | ||
14 | addiction | this type of ~ can have effects | ||
15 | ranging from to | xxx can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school | ||
16 | be sacrificed | homework is sacrificed fro a few more hours on the computer or console | ||
17 | the rise in obesity | ~ in recent years | ||
18 | has been linked in part to | the rise in obesity in recent years ~ the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise | ||
19 | the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise | ~ that often accompany gaming addiction | ||
20 | xxx often accompany gaming addiction | |||
21 | the potential dangers of | ~ video games are more significant than the possible benefits. |
7 Support art
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should support artists rather than allow them to support themselves.
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As the inseparable division of people’s life, art has drawn more and more public attention. While some people maintain artists should live on their own, I believe without support from the government, many artists are unable to support themselves and give up their artistic careers, which will be a great tragedy for all of us.
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First of all, many artists in modern society are struggling for survival. Obviously, most people have the basic knowledge in many aspects of their life, yet not many of them can really appreciate works of art. Thus, quite a few artists cannot be recognized, let alone having a regular income. Even some extraordinary artists are afflicted by poverty and cannot even feed on their own.
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Moreover, if the government just leaves some artists alone without offering any support programs, the death of art may be just around the corner. It can be expained in two folds. On the one hand, many traditional arts and crafts are dying out because the attention to them is on the decrease. On the other hand, many young people are zealous in the pursuit of fame and money, showing less and less enthusiasm about pursuing artistic careers.
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Last but not least, the thriving of art is of great benefit to the society. One reason to think so is that artists, especially those famous one are conducive to promoting the traditional culture and helping the public raise social responsibility. Besides, many forms of art are part of cultural heritage, if they are well inherited, our human world will be more civilized.
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Taking into account their economic situation and essential roles in the society, the government must financially support artists rather than let them die.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
1 | as the inseparable division of | As the inseparable division of people’s life, | BI | ART (100%) |
2 | draw attention | art has drawn more and more public attention. | ||
3 | tragedy | xx will be a great tragedy for all of us | ||
4 | be struggling for | many artists in modern society are struggling for suvival | ||
5 | yet | , yet not many of them can really appreciate works of art | ||
5 | quite a few | [many] quite a few artists cannot be recognized | ||
6 | let alone | quite a few artists cannot be recognized, let alone having a regular income. | ||
7 | extraordinary | Even some extraordinary artists are afflicted by poverty | ||
8 | cannot …, let alone doing xx. Even | |||
9 | feed on their own | support oneself, raise family | ||
10 | leave sb alone without any support | |||
11 | around the corner | |||
12 | traditional arts and crafts | |||
13 | the attention to xxx is on the decrease | |||
14 | be zealous in the pursuit of xx | many young people are zealous in the pursuit of fame and money [zealous = enthusiasm] | ||
15 | ,showing less enthusiasm about | many young people show | ||
17 | the thriving of art | |||
16 | is of great benefit(1,2) to sb | the thriving of art is of great benefit to the society | over time | |
17 | one reason to think so is that | |||
18 | be conducive to doing | [be beneficial] artists are conducive to promoting the traditional culture and helping the public raise social responsibility. | ||
19 | cultural heritage | many forms of art are part of cultural heritage |
1: countable 2:uncountable
8 Luck & Success
“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
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Many people claim that success comes only as a result of hard work, while others believe that it is mostly the result of good fortune. I believe that the former is true; success is only achieved by people who are diligent, hard-working and perseverant. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
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To begin with, success is not the result of a single lucky strike, but is instead the cumulative result of a lot of hard work. Success happens over time and only after a series of correct decisions and small victories. A stroke of luck, in contrast, is generally perceived to be a one-time event. The experience of my uncle, a successful entrepreneur, is a good example of what I mean. He runs a very profitable technology firm which manufactures and sells a wide range of products. His business started very small when he invested his savings to bring to market a single product and hired his first employee. When his single product found a market, my uncle compounded his success with a series of profitable mergers that increased the size of his company. His company later grew from a single employee to include a staff of dozens. While my uncle might have been lucky at one stage of his company’s growth, the long-term success of his firm cannot simply be ascribed to good fortune.
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Secondly, people today tend to misattribute the results of hard work and diligence to simple blind luck. Too many people ascribe to luck things which are actually the result of careful planning, research and “business smarts.” For example, some people said that my uncle was lucky when his initial product offering was successful. However, he was confident that his product would be a hit even before he started manufacturing it. This is because he spent thousands of dollars on market research and focus groups. It was this investment, not luck, which ensured the early success of his business. Likewise, when his small firm completed its first merger just before the target company rose to prominence some called him lucky. In this case, though, my uncle had spent weeks interviewing the research and development team at that company and predicted their success based on what they told him about their planning. Had he not been confident of their success, he would not have completed the merger. Again, this victory was the result of diligence rather than luck, despite what some observers say about it.
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In conclusion, I strongly believe that success comes as a result of hard work, rather than good fortune. This is because success is a gradual and cumulative process, and because the public’s conception of luck is very superficial and hollow.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
1 | luck = good fortune | |||
2 | diligent, hard-working and perseverant | semantic chunking | ||
3 | a single lucky strike | [= A stroke of luck]success is not the result of ~, but is instead the cumulative(<>) result of a lot of hard work | ||
4 | a series of correct decisions and small victories | Success happens over time and only after ~. | TS | |
5 | A stroke of luck | = a single lucky strike | ||
6 | is perceived to | A stroke of luck is generally perceived to be a one-time event. | ||
7 | profitable | profitable technology firm | ||
8 | manufactures and sells | sc | ||
9 | bring to market | is there a service or product you would like to bring to market? | ||
10 | compounded with | he compounded his success with a series of … | ||
11 | profitable mergers | merger: the act of joining two or more organizations or businesses into one | ||
12 | s staff of dozens | the company later grew from a single employee to include a staff of dozens. | ||
13 | be ascribed to | be attributed to | ||
14 | blind luck | pp often tend to misattribute the results of hard work and diligence to simple blind luck. | ||
15 | planning, research and “business smarts” | the result of ~ | ||
16 | a hit | he was confident that his product would be a hit even before he started manufacturing it | ||
17 | market research and focus groups | |||
18 | rise to prominence | |||
19 | gradual and cumulative | success is a gradual and cumulative proces. | sc | |
20 | superficial and hollow | the public’s conception of luck is very superficial and hollow. | sc |
9 Gov Help
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members, so there is no need for the government to help them.
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Solving problems is a necessary part of our daily life, and as we grow older we develop more problem-solving skills. In my opinion, while people can depend on their own or their family members to deal with daily problems, there do exist a few problems that can only be handled by the goverment.
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To begin with, there are an increasing number of environmental problems that are gradually out of everyone’s control. That is to say, most people can hardly do anything effective to solve them. However, the government is in a position to pool resources to reduce severe air pollution. And many governments in the world have successfully protected the environment through legislation.
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In addition, public security calls for help from goverment. With growing rates of crime, citizens’ sense of safety remains to be improved. Apparently, the government is more powerful to combat various crimes than the individuals. By using greater police force and creating more job opportunities, the government can effectively maintain public order and increase the overall social stability.
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Finally, any problems with medical insurance should be addressed by the government. A sad fact in our modern society is that many people are facing high expenses in medical care. Through restructuring, the government can considerably reduce the cost of healthcare. In other words, it is not the individuals but the government who can fundamentally reform the medical system.
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To conclude, as people and their family members have limited powers to change things, government involvement is an indispensable part in the solutions to many of our environmental, social and medical problems.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
1 | with the help from | pp can solve important problems with the help from their family member | ||
2 | a necessary part of | |||
3 | develop skills | develop more problem-solving skills | ||
4 | there do exist | there is/are | ||
5 | out of everyone’s control | many environmental problems are gradually ~ | TS | |
6 | hardly do anything effective to solve | That is to say, most pp ~ these problems | Explaination | |
7 | in the position | Gov is ~ to pool resources to ↓ severe air pollution | ||
8 | protect the environment through legislation | many govs in the world have successfully ~ | ||
9 | call for help | ~ calls for help from | ||
10 | with growing rates of xxx | with growing rates of crime, … | ||
11 | citizens’ sense of safety | with growing rates of crime, ~ remains to be improved. | ||
12 | Apparently, | obviously | ||
13 | be more powerful to | gov ~ combat crimes than individuals | ||
14 | police force & job opps | By using greater police force and creating more job opps, | ||
15 | public order & social stability | By using …, the gov can effectively maintain public order and increase the overall socail stability | ||
16 | problems with medical insurance | any ~ should be addressed by the gov | ||
17 | a sad fact | ~ in our modern society is that … | ||
18 | high expenses in | pp are facing ~ medical care. | ||
19 | Through restructuring | ~, the gov can considerably reduce the cost of healthcare | ||
20 | it is not sb but sb who | It is not the individuals but the government who can fundamentally reform the medical system | ||
21 | gov involvement | ~ is an indispensable part in the solutions to many of our environmental, social and medical problems. | ||
22 | an indispensable part in | gov involvement ~ the solutions to many of our environmental, social and medical problems. |
Position/Attitude | Ideas |
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Main Body 1 | There are an increasing number of environmental problems. |
1. pp can hardly do anything effective to solve them. | |
2. Gov can pool resources to reduce severe air polution | |
3. Only gov can protect the environment through legislation | |
Main Body 2 | Public security calls for help from gov |
1. Citizens’ sense of safety remains to be improved. | |
2. Gov is more powerful to combat various crimes | |
3. Gov can effectively maintain public order | |
Main Body 3 | Problems with medical insurance should be addressed by the government. |
1. Many pp are facing high expenses in medical care. | |
2. Gov can reduce the cost of healthcare | |
3. They can fundamentally reform the medical system |
10 Road Safety
Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.
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On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully.
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On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.
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In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that other road safety measures should also be introduced.
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No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | strict punishments for | [strict penalties for]~ driving offences .. | ||
2 | be the key to doing sth | strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. | ||
3 | with regard to | about/on | ||
4 | the question of how to | |||
5 | driving habits | both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better ~ | ||
6 | certainly help to encourage | strict punishments can ~ pp to drive more safely. | ||
7 | dangerous drivers | Penalties for dangerous drivers can … | ||
8 | act as a deterrent | Penalties for … can ~ | ||
9 | meaning that… | [in turn/thereby]Penalties … as a deterrent, ~ pp avoid repeating the same offence | ||
10 | repeat the same offence | |||
11 | driving punishments | [1]small fines [2]licence suspension [3]driver awareness courses [4] prison sentences | ||
12 | punishments is to show sb that | the aim of these ~ their actions have - consequences | ||
13 | disciplined and alert | we would hope that drivers become more ~ | ||
14 | follow the rules | we also hope that drivers follow the rules more carefully | ||
15 | safe driving | ~ can be promoted in several diff ways that do not punish drivers | ||
16 | start to do | edu pp properly before they start to drive | ||
17 | an extended driving test | this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more diffcult driving test | ||
18 | attention could be paid to sth | ~ safe road design | ||
19 | safe road design | signs, speed bumps & road bends, speed cameras | ||
20 | warm pp, calm traffic, deter pp from | |||
21 | signs | ~ can be used to warn pp | ||
22 | speed bumps & road bends | ~ can be added to calm traffic | ||
23 | speed cameras | ~ can help to deter pp from driving to quickly | ||
24 | invest in | gov & local councils could reduce road accidents by ~ing in better public transport | ||
25 | prevent bad driving, |
11 Stay Healthy
People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Maintaining our health is one of the most effective ways of ensuring that we live a long and happy life. I do many things in order to stay fit, but the most important maintaining a healthy diet. There are two reasons why I think this is critically important, which I will explore in the following essay.
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To begin with, eating healthy food prevents obesity, which is the cause of many very serious illnesses. Obesity is debilitating all by itself, but it also causes patients to suffer from a variety of other illnesses, including diabetes, arthritis and heart disease. It is important to be aware of this connection when making decisions about the food which we eat. My eldest cousin is a good example of this. While my cousin maintained a healthy weight throughout high school and university (despite eating a lot of unhealthy snacks and junk food), when he entered adulthood his metabolism changed and he began to rapidly gain weight. My cousin is not a particularly self-conscious individual and was never bothered by how his weight gain affected his appearance, so he continued to eat an unhealthy diet. However, he was eventually diagnosed with adult-onset diabetes which has had a profound effect on his quality of life. He now regrets not being a bit more careful about his consumption choices.
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Secondly, eating healthy food gives me a lot of energy, which keeps me effective in my personal and professional pursuits. It is no secret that people who are lacking in certain vitamins and nutrients lack the energy necessary to complete even simple tasks. I recall how when I was a university student I often skipped meals because I was quite busy studying. As a result of not eating proper meals, I started to suffer from fatigue and lethargy. My grades began to drop because when it came time to write my tests I could barely keep my eyes open long enough to answer the questions. Not only that, but my submitted assignments were also quite poor as my fatigue made me unable to keep up with them. The following year I was a bit more diligent about making healthy food choices and my grades quickly recovered.
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In conclusion, the most important thing I do in order to stay healthy is maintain a nutritious diet. This is because keeping a healthy diet prevents obesity and related diseases, and because it gives me the energy to keep up with my academic and professional obligations.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | stay fit | I do many things in order to stay fit [= stay healthy] | ||
2 | prevent obesity | which is the cause of many very serious illnesses | ||
3 | debilitate | Obesity is debilitating all by itself | ||
4 | suffer from | it also causes patients to suffer from a variety of other illnesses | ||
5 | a variety of other illnesses | (adult-onset)diabetes, arthritis, heart disease | SC | Health, Food(100%) |
6 | maintain a healthy weight | |||
7 | metabolism | the chemical processes in living things that change food, etc. into energy and materials for growth | ||
8 | gain weight | he was bothered by how his weight gain affected his appearance | ||
9 | self-conscious individuals | |||
10 | continue to do | he continued to eat an unhealthy diet. | ||
11 | be diagnosed with | he was eventually diagnosed with adult-onset diabetes | ||
12 | one’s quality of life | Health, Food(100%) | ||
13 | regrets not doing | He now regrets not being a bit more careful about his consumption choices. | ||
14 | keep sb effective in personal & professional pursuits | eating healthy keeps me ~ | ||
15 | It is no secret that | it is quite common that/it is not uncommon that | ||
16 | be lacking in | pp are lacking in certain vitamins and nutrients | ||
17 | vitamins & nutrients | |||
18 | the energy necessary to | lack the energy necessary to complete even simple tasks | ||
19 | skip meal | I often ~ because I was quite busy studying | ||
20 | be busy doing | |||
21 | as a result of not doing xxx | ~ eating proper meals, I started to suffer from fatigue & lethargy | ||
22 | fatigue | a feeling of being extremely tired, usually because of hard work or exercise | ||
23 | lethargy | the state of not having any energy or enthusiasm for doing things | ||
24 | Not only that, | Apart from that, | ||
25 | keep up with | to learn about or be aware of the news, current events, etc. | ||
26 | the following year | the next year | ||
27 | become more diligent about doing | showing care and effort in your work or duties | ||
28 | a nutritious diet | <> an unhealthy diet | ||
29 | obligations | keep up with my academic and professional obligations.[= responsibility] |
12 Celebrities
Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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It is true that some celebrities are known for their glamorous lifestyles rather than for the work they do. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example for children, I believe that other famous people act as positive role models.
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On the one hand, many people do achieve fame without really working for it. They may have inherited money from parents, married a famous or wealthy person, or they may have appeared in gossip magazines or on a reality TV programme. A good example would be Paris Hilton, who is rich and famous for the wrong reasons. She spends her time attending parties and nightclubs, and her behaviour promotes the idea that appearance, glamour and media profile are more important than hard work and good character. The message to young people is that success can be achieved easily, and that school work is not necessary.
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On the other hand, there are at least as many celebrities whose accomplishments make them excellent role models for young people. Actors, musicians and sports stars become famous idols because they have worked hard and applied themselves to develop real skills and abilities. They demonstrate great effort, determination and ambition, which is required for someone who wants to be truly successful in their chosen field. An example is the actor and martial artist Jackie Chan, who has become world famous through years of practice and hard work. This kind of self-made celebrity can inspire children to develop their talents through application and perseverance.
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In conclusion, it seems to me that the influence of celebrities on young people can be positive as well as negative.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | glamour & wealth | many pp are more famous for their ~ than for achievements | ||
2 | be known for | some celebrities ~ for their glamorous lifestyles rather than the work they do | ||
3 | set good/bad example for sb | = act as positive/negative role models | ||
4 | fame | many pp do achieve fame without really working for it. | ||
5 | inherit | they may have inherited $ from parents. | ||
6 | fame <- inherit, marry & appear | they may have ~ed $ from parents, ~ed a famous or wealthy person, or they may have ~ed in .. | ||
7 | gossip magazines or a reality TV programme | they many have appeared in ~ | ||
8 | for the wrong reasons | who is rich & famous ~ | ||
9 | attending parties & nightclubs | |||
10 | promote the idea | one’s behaviour promotes the idea that …. | ||
11 | appearance, glamour and media profile | ~ are more important than hard work and good character | ||
12 | hard work & good character | |||
13 | The message to sb | ~ young pp is that success can be achieved easily | ||
14 | as many | there are at least ~ celebrities ….. | ||
15 | accomplishment | [= achievement] their ~ make them excellent role models for young pp. | ||
16 | Actors, musicians and sports stars | Famous pp | ||
17 | work hard & apply oneself to do .. | pp become idols because they have ~ed & ~ed develop their real skills and abilities. | ||
18 | effort, determination & ambitions | They demonstrate great ~, which is required for sb who wants to be successful | ||
19 | through years of practice and hard work | sb become world famous through ~ | ||
20 | self-made celebrity | |||
21 | inspire sb to develop one’s talents | this kind of self-made celebrity can inspire children ~ through application and perseverance | ||
22 | application & perseverance | application(determination to work hard at something; great effort) perseverance (the quality of continuing to try to achieve a particular aim despite difficulties) |
13 Earth
Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Human activity is causing the world to change at a rapid pace these days. I am of the opinion that humanity has had a mostly negative effect on the planet. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
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To begin with, industrial development has caused major air pollution, which has a terrible effect on human health. Every week I hear news reports about how horrible air quality is in major cities all over the world. At the same time, we often hear that chronic lung diseases are on the rise and that there is connection between these two trends. I am reminded of the years I spent living in Beijing, China. After having spent most of my life living in a small town where the air is mostly clean, I immediately noticed the smog and pollution of the big city. Within months I was suffering from a variety of respiratory illnesses and had difficulty breathing. I spent quite a few afternoons at a local hospital being treated for various throat and lung infections. A majority of the population of the Earth now resides in cities and all such people are suffering from the consequences of industrial development.
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Secondly, human development has lead to a massive accumulation of trash, which spoils the natural beauty of this planet. While in the past products were often made of biodegradable materials like paper and wood, today most manufactured goods are made of plastic, which never breaks down. Such materials eventually find their way into permanent landfills, but just as often end up as litter. When I traveled to the island in Hainan last summer I was struck by the beauty of the place, but I also noticed that the natural environment was marred by an accumulation of plastic bags and water bottles that were strewn everywhere, even in otherwise pristine forests and rivers. Had I visited the island a century ago I would not have found it tainted in such a way.
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In conclusion, I strongly believe that human activity has made the planet a less pleasant place to live. This is because people are more likely to suffer from the effects of pollution than in the past, and because human waste has destroyed the natural beauty of our world.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | change at a rapd pacew | |||
2 | be of the opinion that | |||
3 | industrial development | ~ has caused major air pollution | ||
4 | a terrible effect | has a ~ on human health | ||
5 | horrible air quality | |||
6 | chronic lung diseases | ~ are on the rise | ||
7 | connection between | there is connection between horrible air quality and chronic lung diseases | ||
8 | be reminded of | I am reminded of the years I spent living in Beijing | ||
9 | immediately notice | I ~ed the smog and pollution of the big city | ||
10 | suffer from | within months I was suffering from a variety of respiratory illnesses and had difficulty breathing | ||
11 | a variety respiratory illnesses | -> had difficulty breathing | ||
12 | throat and lung infections | I spent quite a few afternoons at a local hospital being treated for various ~ | ||
13 | reside in | A majority of the population of the Earth now resides in cities | ||
14 | a massive accumulation of trash | human development has lead to ~ | ||
15 | spoils the natural beauty of | ~ this planet | ||
16 | biodegradable materials | in the past products were often made of ~ like paper and wood | ||
17 | manufactured goods | today most ~ are made of plastic | ||
18 | break down | plastic never breaks down | ||
19 | permanent landfills | such materials eventually find their way into permanent landfills | ||
20 | end up | |||
21 | be struck by | I was struck by the beauty of the place | ||
22 | be marred by | [mar = taint]I also noticed that the natural environment was marred by an accumulation of plastic bags and water bottles | ||
23 | an accumulation of | ~ plastic bags and water bottles strewn everywhere | ||
24 | strew | v/adj if a place is strewn with things, they are lying scattered there | ||
25 | pristine[‘pristin] forests and rivers | |||
26 | Had sb done …, sb would (not) have done … | Had I visited the island a century ago I would not have found it tainted in such a way | ||
27 | taint | mar |
14 Film
Many people prefer foreign films, while others are more like to watch locally produced films. Which would your prefer? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
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It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.
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There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.
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In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the ‘Lord of the Rings’ films, which were partly funded by government subsidies.
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In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | foreign films <> locally produced films | |||
2 | locally = domestically | domestically produced films | ||
3 | film-making | gov should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry | ||
4 | subsidy(n.) subsidize(vt.) | |||
5 | more enjoyable | many pp find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries | ||
6 | the established film industries | ~ in certain countries have huge budgets for action special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations | ||
7 | huge budgets for | xxx have ~ action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations | ||
8 | Hollywood blockbusters | ‘Avatar’ or the Jams Bond films are examples of such productions | ||
9 | global appeal | their ~ is undeniable | ||
10 | undeniable | |||
11 | big-budget films <> low-budget filmmaking | Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that | ||
12 | star | these successful films often star the most famous actors and actresses | ||
13 | accomplished producers and directors | these films are made by the most ~ | ||
14 | suffer(vi.) | low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison | ||
15 | support .. financially | gov should support local film industries financially | ||
16 | talented amateur film-makers | there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opp to prove themselves | ||
17 | from overseas | To compare with big-budget productions from overseas, … | ||
18 | a host of costs related to doing | they need $ to pay for film crews, actors and ~ producing high-quality films | ||
19 | help (sb) with sth | if gov did help with these costs | ||
20 | an increase in employment, income from sales, a rise in # | If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. | ||
21 | be partly funed by | the ‘Lord of the Rings’ films is partly funded by New Zealand gov subdidies | ||
22 | help to raise the quality of | increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films | ||
23 | compete with | increased financial support could allow them to compete with the foreign productions | ||
24 | dominate the market |
15 Unpaid Work
Teenagers should be required to do unpaid work
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Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.
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Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.
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At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.
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In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | on a volunteer basis | Many young pp work on a volunteer basis | ||
2 | force ab to do | force all teenagers to do unpaid work | ||
3 | be already under enough pressure | Most young pp ~ with their studies, without being given the added reponsibility of working in their spare time. | ||
4 | as demanding as a full-time job | School is just as demanding as a full-time job | ||
5 | expect students to do homework and revision | teachers ~ on top of attending lessons every day | ||
6 | on top of doing sth | |||
7 | spare time = free time | |||
8 | When sb has/have time, we should encourage them to enjoy & spend | |||
9 | many years of work ahead of sb | They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies. | ||
10 | has/have anything to gain from | I do not believe that society ~ obliging[= force] young pp to do unpaid work. | ||
11 | In fact | in reality | ||
12 | go against | it ~es the values of a free and fair society to force a group of pp to do sth against their will | ||
13 | resentment | Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young pp and parents | ||
14 | be being used | young pp would feel that they were being used | ||
15 | raise children | parents would not want to be told how to ~ | ||
16 | surely | this is ~ the best system. | ||
17 | make this compulsory | teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not ~ |
16 Animal experiments
Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the development of medicines.
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On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research.
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On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.
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In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | be widely used to | animal experiments ~ develop … and to test … | ||
2 | medicines | |||
3 | animal experiments/experimentation (animal testing for) | these ~ should be banned because it is morally worng to cause animals to suffer | ||
4 | be in favour of | others are them | ||
5 | humanity | benefits(n.) to ~ | ||
6 | be routinely tested on | it is true that medicines and other products ~ animals | ||
7 | be cleared for | before these medicines ~ human use | ||
8 | human use | |||
9 | tend towards the viewpoint that | I ~ animal testing is morally wrong | ||
10 | a limited amount of animal experimentation | I support ~ for the development of medicines | ||
11 | clear ethical arguments | there are ~ animal experimentation. | ||
12 | To use a common example of this practice | |||
13 | be measured | the effectiveness of a new drug can ~ | ||
14 | subject sb to | pp have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma | ||
15 | trauma | |||
16 | lives | the lives of all creatures should be respected | ||
17 | justify | the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering(n) caused | ||
18 | alternative methods(reliable alternatives to) | |||
19 | supporters & opponents | supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that | ||
20 | a certain amount of | ~ suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justifed if human lives are saved | ||
21 | feel differently | sb may ~ if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment … | ||
22 | the banning of (smoking, non-medical products) | I agree ~ animal testing for non-medical products | ||
23 | a necessary evil where | I feel that it may be ~ where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned | ||
24 | until | it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animal for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed |
17 Music
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
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It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international music.
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Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives. As children, we are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language, or simply as a form of enjoyment. Children delight in singing with others, and it would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a connection between participants, regardless of their age. Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our favourite songs as part of our life stories. Music both expresses and arouses emotions in a way that words alone cannot. In short, it is difficult to imagine life without it.
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In my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international music that has become so popular. International pop music is often catchy and fun, but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people. Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history of a country. Traditional styles, such as …(example)…, connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity. It would be a real pity if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared.
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In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that traditional music should be given more importance than international music.
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No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | tradictional music <> international music | international(modern) music is heard everywhere | ||
2 | a rich variety of | ~ musical styles can be found around the world | ||
3 | for a range of reasons | |||
4 | accompany ab | Music is something that ~ies all of us throughout our lives. | ||
5 | as a means of | we are taught songs as a means of learning language, or as a form of enjoyment. | ||
6 | delight in | Children ~ singing with others. | ||
7 | it would appear that | it seems to me that … | ||
8 | create a connection between | the act of singing in a group ~s between participants, regardless of their age. | ||
9 | Later in life, | |||
10 | preferences develop | Later in life, pp’s musical preferences develop | ||
11 | come to see | we will see our favourite songs as part of our life stories. | ||
12 | express & arouse | Music both ~s emotions in a way that words alone cannot. | ||
13 | be valued over | Traditional music should ~ the international music | ||
14 | catchy & fun | International pop music is often ~ | ||
15 | a commercial product | it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business pp | ||
16 | the culture, customs and history | Traditional music, by constrast, expresses ~ of a country | ||
17 | connect sb to | Traditional styles connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity | ||
18 | It would be a real pity | ~ if pop music become so predominant that these national styles disappeared | ||
19 | predominant | |||
20 | a necessary part of | music is ~ human existence | ||
21 | be given more importance than |
18 Tech
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
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It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects.
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Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or country. Finally, many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face.
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On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions by email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies can also have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction. For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships.
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In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.
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No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | ever | the Internet allow business pp in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other. | ||
2 | common interests | |||
3 | be limited to | when communication was limited to written letters or telegrams, … | ||
4 | as good as | interactions by email, phone or video are almost ~ face-to-face meetings | ||
5 | either .. or .. | many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts | ||
6 | mix with peers | many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers | ||
7 | substitute for(alternative to) | these ‘virtual’ relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships | ||
8 | revolutionise | tech has certainly ~ed communication between pp | ||
9 | the outcomes of the revolution | but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive | ||
10 | medium | books are not the best medium for communicating news stories |
Advantages / disadvantages of books:
The main advantage of books is that they are usually considered to be reliable sources of information. People tend to refer to books when they want to research a subject in depth, and for this reason they continue to play an important role in education. On the other hand, books quickly go out of date, and therefore they are not the best medium for communicating news stories.
Advantages / disadvantages of radio:
Radio is a much more effective medium than books for the communication of up-to-date information. We can listen to news broadcasts about events as they happen, and a key benefit of radio is that we can listen to it while doing other activities, such as driving or working. The main drawback of radio, when compared to books or television, is that there is no visual element; we cannot see what the broadcaster is describing.
Advantages / disadvantages of TV, and my opinion:
In my opinion, television is the most effective of these three media because it brings us closer to reality than a book or radio programme ever can. For example, we can watch events as they take place on the other side of the world, or we can see the body language of a politician who is being interviewed. The disadvantages of television are that programmes tend to be short and interrupted by advertisements, meaning that information is presented in limited depth.
19 Language
Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved.
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There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.
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Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve languages that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s history.
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In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage.
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No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | in danger of | Several languages are in danger in extinction | ||
2 | minority<>majority | some minority languages may disappear in the near future | ||
3 | save $ by allowing this to happen | |||
4 | sth should be protected & preserved | |||
5 | a small # of | if a language is only spoken by ~ pp | ||
6 | facilities, teachers & marketing | the state will have to pay for ~ | ||
7 | $ might be better spent on | This ~ other public services. | ||
8 | cheaper & more efficient | it would be much cheaper and more for countries to have just one language | ||
9 | cut costs | gov could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group | ||
10 | related to doing | |||
11 | Despite …, | Despite the above arguments, …. | ||
12 | preserve | gov should try to preserve languages that are less widely spoken | ||
13 | much more than a means of | A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital connection with … | ||
14 | cultural identity | a language has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the pp who speak it | ||
15 | cultural diversity | If a languages disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, an we will lose the rich ~ tha makes societyies more interesting. | ||
16 | traditions, customs & behaviours | they are part of a country’s history | ||
17 | cultural heritage |
20 Gender & Jobs
Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Women now compete and cooperate with men in almost all walks of life and they have proved their mettle, too. However, men and women are not built alike. They may have the same intellectual capabilities, but physically and emotionally men and women are different and that probably explains why certain jobs are considered suitable for men and certain other jobs suitable for women.
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Until a few decades ago many people used to believe that women are not suitable for a career in science or finance. Such wrong notions no longer exist because many women have proved that they make equally brilliant engineers and number crunchers. Still, certain sectors prefer men over women. There are also some sectors where women outperform men.
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Thanks to their stronger physique, men are more suitable for physically demanding jobs than women. For example, jobs in mining and mechanics are laborious and involve handling heavy machinery. A few women have proved that they are capable of handling such jobs, but the majority of workers employed in these sectors are men. The armed forces also recruit more men than women.
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Though women lack physical prowess, they score better than men in some other areas. For example, women are more caring and patient. These qualities make them become excellent teachers and nurses. Women also possess better people skills and are considered more suitable for careers in hospitality and public relations.
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Of course, several women have proved that they are capable of doing just about anything that men can. Take for instance, the case of Madam Curie, the first woman to win the Nobel Prize for Physics. She proved her mettle at a time when science and technology were largely dominated by men. Women have also conquered the seas, the mountains and the skies. The fact that they lacked muscle power didn’t deter them from pursuing their goals. Still, these are exceptions rather than the rules.
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In conclusion, certain jobs are more suitable for men. There are also certain jobs where women perform better than men. Personally I believe that a person’s physical and intellectual capabilities, rather than gender, should determine his or her career choice. If a woman possesses sufficient physical strength and is determined enough to pursue a career in a male dominated sector, her gender should not come in the way of her goal. The same theory applies to men as well.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | qualities | pp think that men & women have diff ~ | ||
2 | be suitable for | some certain jobs are suitable for men | ||
3 | compete & cooperate with | Women now ~ men in almost all walks of life | ||
4 | awalk of life | a person’s job or position in society | ||
5 | mettle(.n) | the courage to carry on;the ability and determination to do something successfully despite difficult conditions | ||
6 | capabilities | intellectual ~; physically & emotionally (different) | ||
7 | be considered adj for sb | this probably explains why certain jobs are considered suitable for men | ||
8 | Until xxx ago … did | Until a few decades ago many pp used to believe that ….. | ||
9 | science & finance | women are not suitable for a career in ~ | Explaination | 30% |
10 | notions | such wrong ~ no longer exist because … | ||
11 | brilliant engineers & number crunchers | because women have proved that they make equally brilliant engineers and number crunchers | ||
12 | number crunchers | 1. a person whose job involves working with numbers, such as an accountant | ||
2. a computer or computer program that works with numbers and calculates data | ||||
13 | Still, | However, certain sectors prefer men over women. There are also some sectors where women outperform men. | ||
14 | physique | the size and shape of a person’s body | ||
15 | physically demanding jobs | Thanks to their stronger physique, men are more suitable for ~ than women | Idea | gender 100% |
16 | laborious(mining, armed forces & mechanics) | jobs in mining and mechanics are ~ and involve handling heavy machinery. | ||
17 | be capable of doing | a few women have proved that they ~ handling such jobs | ||
18 | the majority of | ~ workers employed in these sectors are men | ||
19 | recruit | The armed forces also recuit more men than women | ||
20 | physical prowess | Although women lack physical powess, … | ||
21 | score(vi.) | Althoug …, women score better than men in some other areas. | ||
22 | caring & patient | women are more ~(teachers & nurses). These qualities make them become excellent teachers & nurses | ||
23 | possess | women also possess better pp skills and are considered more suitable for careers in hospitality and public relations | ||
24 | Take for instance, | |||
25 | do about | [=cope with, treat with] several women have proved that they are capable of doing about anything that men can | ||
26 | Madam Curie | the first woman to win the Nobel Prize for Physics | ||
27 | dominate | technology were largely dominated by men | ||
28 | conquer | women have also conquered the seas, the mountains and the skies. | ||
29 | the fact that .. didn’t deter sb from | The fact that they lacked muscle power didn’t deter them from pursuing their goals | ||
30 | rather than gender | I believe that a persons’ physical and intelectual capabilities, rather than gender, should determine his or her career choice. | ||
31 | come in the way of | her gender should not come in the way of her goal. |
21 Same culture
Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands. To what extent the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
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We are now living in a global village where geographical barriers have become insignificant. All over the world, people wear the same kind of clothes, eat the same foods and watch the same films. In my opinion, this trend has made life easier for us all.
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There are several benefits to following global fashion trends. It makes traveling easier. For example, now Indians and Americans or Europeans have more or less the same tastes in fashion, food and music. As a result, young Indian professionals can travel to the US or Europe and still feel at home there.
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The biggest advantage of following a global lifestyle is that it eliminates culture shock when you travel to other countries. It also protects you from discrimination. When you wear the same kind of clothes or eat the same kind of foods as everyone else, you will not stand out. This will actually protect you from various forms of discrimination that you might experience when you are in a foreign country. An Indian woman living in the US will be at a disadvantage if she insists on wearing only traditional Indian clothes and eating only vegetarian foods. This will limit the choices she has, but if she is willing to follow the culture of the country she lives in, life will be easier for her.
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The only disadvantage of this trend is the loss of ethnicity. Every nation has its traditional styles of fashion and clothing. When everyone wears the same kind of clothes, this cultural legacy gets lost.
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To conclude, the benefits of following global trends in lifestyle and fashion are many. It makes life easier for the globetrotting youngsters. There are, nonetheless, a few disadvantages, but there is an easy way to get around them. People who are proud of their ethnic fashion and lifestyle can follow it when they are in their own country.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | a global village | where geographical barriers have become insignificant | ||
2 | insignificant | |||
3 | have made life easier | this trend has made life easier for us all | ||
4 | more or less | now Indians and Americans or Europeans have ~ the same tastes in fashion, food and music. | ||
5 | There are several benefits to doing | ~ following a global lifestyle is that it … | ||
6 | eliminate culture shock | it eliminates culture shock when you travel to other countries. | ||
7 | discrimination | protects sb from ~ | ||
8 | stand out | you will not stand out. | ||
9 | at a disadvantage | An Indian woman living in the us will be at a disadvantage if .. | ||
10 | insist on | if he insists on wearing only traditional clothes and eating only vegetarian foods | ||
11 | vegetarian foods | |||
12 | ethnicity | the only disadvantage of this trend is the loss of ethnicity | ||
13 | cultural legacy | When everyone wears the same kind of clothes, this cultural legacy gets lost | ||
14 | the benefits of doing | ~ following global trends in lifestyle and fashion are many | ||
15 | globetrotting | the activity of travelling in many countries all over the world | ||
15 | the globetrotting youngsters | It makes life easier for ~ | ||
16 | There are, nonetheless, a few disadvantages | |||
17 | get around | avoid | ||
18 | ethnic [ˈeθnɪk] | People who are pround of their ~ fashion and lifestyle can follow it when they are in their own country. |
22 Museum: Entaining/Educational
Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
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People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.
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On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. This type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions.
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On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.
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In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | the role & function | pp have diff views about ~ of museums. | ||
2 | entertaining & educational | museums can and should be both ~ | ||
3 | entertain (vi.) | ~ (somebody) (with something) to interest and amuse somebody in order to please them | ||
4 | tourist attractions | Museums are ~ | ||
5 | exhibit sth | their aim is to ~ a collection of interesting objects(exhibition=exhibit n.) | ||
6 | become bored | The average visitor may ~ if he or she has to read and listen to too much educational content | ||
7 | enjoyment rather than learning | museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning | ||
8 | visually spectacular | This type of museum is designed to be ~ | ||
9 | interactive activities or even games | This type of museum may have ~ as part of its exhibitions. | ||
10 | did not previously know | The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors sth that they ~ | ||
11 | Usually this means that … | ~ the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained | ||
12 | professional guides/headsets | |||
13 | detailed commentary | museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to ~ about the exhibition | ||
14 | history, culture, science | museums play an important role in teaching pp about ~ | ||
15 | an interesting, enjoyable & educational | a good museum shoul be able to offer ~ experience | ||
16 | have fun and learn sth |
23 Computer
Computer technology has had more of a negative impact than a positive impact on the society? How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
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Every coin has two sides; computer technology is no different. However, I can’t agree with the argument that its disadvantages outweigh its advantages. Yes, there are some negative aspects, but in my opinion, there are many more positive aspects.
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Computers and the internet have made us more efficient. Today huge amounts of information are available online. If we have a computer and an internet connection we can access the whole of this information from anywhere in the world. The internet has made it possible for us to stay connected to our near and dear ones all the time. It has made it possible for people to work from their home and get paid. Thanks to the internet, we can now learn foreign languages without leaving our country.
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Computers have increased our efficiency. We can now perform more tasks in less time. Jobs that took weeks or months 20 or 30 years ago can now be done in a matter of hours. Computer technology also allows doctors to diagnose diseases more accurately. It helps us to predict natural calamities and save lives.
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There are some drawbacks as well. People’s privacy often gets violated on the internet. Also, in the recent past there have been several incidents of hacking. Malicious software programs like viruses can infect computers and compromise the personal and financial information of the user. However, in most cases, these problems can be controlled with a little effort. For example, by installing anti-virus programs on their computer, people can protect their computers from malware and spyware.
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To conclude, computers and the internet have improved our lives in many ways. There are some negative impacts as well, but they cannot be a hindrance for the positive development of mankind.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | more of + n. | Computer technology has had more of a negative impact than a positive impact on the society | ||
2 | make us more efficient | |||
3 | a huge amount of | a limited amount of / a certain amount of | ||
4 | stay connected to | the Internet has made it possible for us to ~ our near and dear ones all the time. | ||
5 | without doing | Thanks to the internet, we can now learn foreign languages without leaving our country | ||
6 | increase one efficiency | Computers have increased our efficiency. | ||
7 | in a matter of hours | Jobs that took weeks 10years ago can now be done ~ | ||
8 | diagnose | computers also allow doctors to diagnose diseases more accurately | ||
9 | calamity | an event resulting in great loss and misfortune | ||
10 | privacy gets violated | pp’s privacy often gets violated on the internet. | ||
11 | incidents of hacking | the phone hacking incidents | ||
12 | Malicious[mə’lɪʃəs] | ~ software: viruses can infect computers and compromise personal and financial info of the user | ||
13 | controlled with a little effort | For example, by installing anti-virus on their computer | ||
14 | malware & spyware | pp can protect their computers from ~ | ||
15 | hindrance [ ‘hindrəns ] | These negative impacts cannot be a hindrance for the positive development of mankind. |
24 Businesses & Social Responsibilities
As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.
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On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
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On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
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In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
(285 words, band 9)
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | have always sought to | Businesses have always sought to make a profit | ||
2 | increasingly common | it is becoming ~ to hear … | ||
3 | social obligations | social responsibilities | ||
4 | in a competitive world | I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive ~ | ||
5 | logical | it seems logical that … | ||
6 | the priority of .. should be to do .. | It seems logical that ~ any company should be to cover its running cost | ||
7 | running cost | employees wages & payments for buildings and utilities | ||
8 | improvements & innovations | companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations | ||
9 | the changing needs of | If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet ~ customers, | ||
10 | irrelevant | any concerns about social responsibilities become ~ | ||
11 | financial health | a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good ~ | ||
12 | be run with aim of | companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit | ||
13 | a wider role | they have ~ to play in society. | ||
14 | treat … well, rather than exploiting | One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their exployees well, rather than exploiting them. | ||
15 | “living wage” | they could pay a ~ to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. | ||
16 | local charities, env projects or edu initiatives | use a proportion of their profits to support ~ | ||
17 | accounting loopholes | instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using ~, | ||
18 | place as much importance on .. as sb do | I believe that companies should ~ they do on their financial objectives |
25 Socialize Online
Nowadays more people prefer to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?
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People are glued to their cellphones and tablets. They are constantly updating their status on social networks and checking out the photos and videos uploaded by their virtual friends. In fact, most of us now have more friends online than in the real world. In my opinion, this is a negative development that can have far reaching consequences.
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Excessive online socialization can lead to depression, isolation and behavioural problems. The internet is a great platform to share views and opinions, but it also fuels unhealthy competition among people. Studies have shown that people develop an inferiority complex when their friends get more comments or likes than them.
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Social media has many negative sides. There is no guarantee that the people we meet online are actually real. Many of them create fake profiles with the objective of cheating naïve users. There have been several instances of teenagers committing suicide after they got cheated by their online friends. Most people who are addicted to online socialization have hardly any time for talking to their family members or neighbours. This affects family relationships. Also, it can cause the individual to become isolated from his community.
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Face to face communications, on the other hand, lead to the development of trustworthy relationships that last long. Meeting a friend or a dear one over a coffee or in a park is always a memorable experience. Social media friendships lack that warmth. Also, we cannot expect our online friends living in another part of the globe to help us when we are in trouble.
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To conclude, it is not hard to see that excessive online socialization is bad. It affects our relationships. It is true that the internet has enriched our lives in many ways, but if we are addicted to it, we will develop many problems. After all, the virtual world cannot replace the real world; neither can virtual friends the real ones.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | socialize | more pp prefer to ~ online rather than face to face | ||
2 | be glued to | pp are glued to their cellphones and tablets | ||
3 | cellphones & tablets | |||
4 | update status & check out | They are constantly updateing their status on social networks | ||
5 | more friends online than in the real world | |||
6 | far reaching consequences | profound consequences | ||
7 | Excessive online socialization | ~ can lead to depression, isolation & behavioural problems | ||
8 | depression, isolation & behavioural problems | negative emotions and behavioural problems | ||
9 | fuel unhealthy competition | The Internet is a great platform to share …, but it also ~s among pp | ||
10 | inferiority complex | a sense of personal inferiority arising from conflict between the desire to be noticed and the fear of being humiliated | ||
11 | desire | We all desire your early reply to this inquiry. | ||
12 | more comments & likes | people develop an inferiority complex when their friends get ~ than them | ||
13 | negative sides | |||
14 | no guarantee | There is ~ that the pp we meet online are actually real. | ||
15 | fake profiles | Many of them create ~ with the objective of cheating naive users. | ||
16 | commit suicide | There have been several instances of teenagers ~ing | ||
17 | got cheated by friends | |||
18 | be addicted to | most pp who ~ online socialization have hardly any time for talking to their family members or neighbours. | ||
19 | cause sb to do | it can cause the individual to become isolated from his community | ||
20 | trustworthy relationships | F2F communications -> the development of ~ that last long. | ||
21 | over a coffee or in a park | meeting a friend or a dear one ~ is always a memorable experience. | ||
22 | memorable experience | |||
23 | warmth | Social media friendships lack that warmth. | ||
24 | the globe | we cannot expect our online friends living in another part of the globe to help us when we are in trouble. | ||
25 | it is not hard to see that | |||
26 | neither | the virtual world cannot replace the real world; neither can virtual friends the real ones |
26 GM foods
For a long time there has been concern about the quality of the food we eat because of additives and contaminants. Recently genetically modified (GM) food has become more common, causing concern. Is this concern justified or not?
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People are getting more and more concerned about the quality of food they eat. The rich and the famous have already switched to organic foods. Such foods are costly and nutritious. Unfortunately, few people can afford them. Those who cannot afford to buy organic foods are also making a conscious effort to choose foods wisely. They refuse to buy foods containing additives and preservatives. Some of them are also against genetically modified foods. They are worried that GM foods might cause diseases like cancer. However, till date, we haven’t got anything to prove that GM foods cause cancer.
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GM foods have been around for over 20 years. Contrary to popular belief these foods have not been linked to cancer or another disease. There have been several studies, but none managed to prove that GM crops cause cancer.
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Organic foods are certainly healthier than GM foods, but their affordability is an issue. Organic foods don’t contain pesticides. Since pesticides are not used, their yield per hectare is low. Because of these reasons organic foods are way beyond the reach of common man. By contrast GM foods are cheaper. GM plants are resistant to droughts, floods and pests. They can be grown using very little water. Also, they can resist pests. They provide better yields and hence prices are low.
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Over the last few decades, there has been a dramatic increase in world population. The world population is expected to reach 8 billion within the next few years. When there is an increase in population, the need for food also increases. In such a scenario, the only practical solution is to grow more GM foods. Unless our scientists find a healthier and cheaper option, GM foods are here to stay.
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To conclude, people have the freedom to decide what they should eat. If they are particularly concerned about GM foods, they don’t have to eat such foods. However, in my opinion, these fears are baseless. Many people simply overlook the major benefits of GM foods and instead focus on their unproven negative effects.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | there has been concern about | For a long time ~ the quality of the food we eat | ||
2 | additives & contaminants | |||
3 | GM | genetically modified food | ||
4 | justified | Is this concern justified or not? | ||
5 | get concerned about | pp are getting more and more concerned about the quality of food they eat. | ||
6 | switch to | the rich and the famous have already switched to organic foods. | ||
7 | costly & nutritious | such foods are ~ | ||
8 | afford to | Those who cannot afford to buy organic foods are also making a conscious effort to choose foods wisely | ||
9 | making a conscious effort to | |||
10 | refuse to buy | They ~ foods containing additives and preservatives. | ||
11 | be warried | they are worried that | ||
12 | till date | ~, we haven’t got anything to prove that GM foods cause cancer. | ||
13 | be linked to | Contrary to popular belief these foods have not been linked to cancer or another disease. | ||
14 | none | There have been several studies, but none managed to prove that GM foods cause cancer | ||
15 | organic foods | ~ are certainly healthier than GM foods. | ||
16 | affordability | the ~ of organic foods is an issue. | ||
17 | pesticides | Organic foods don’t contain ~ | ||
18 | yield per hectare | their ~ is low. | ||
19 | be way beyond | because of these reasons organic foods are way beyond the reach of common man | ||
20 | the reach of | |||
21 | be resistant to | GM plants ~ droughts, floods and pests | ||
22 | be grown | the can be grown using very little water. | ||
23 | resist | they can ~ pests | ||
24 | better yields | they can provide ~ and hence prices are low | ||
25 | over , have done | Over the last few decades, there has been a dramatic increase in world population. | ||
26 | the need for food | ~ also increases | ||
27 | be here to stay | Unless our scientists find a healthier and cheaper option, GM foods are here to stay. | ||
28 | baseless | these fears are baseless | ||
29 | overlook | |||
30 | unproven | Many people simply overlook the major benefits of GM foods and instead focus on their unproven negative effects. |
#27 Parents & TV
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To make children do well in school, parents should limit the hours that children spend on watching TV or movies.
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In contemporary society, watching TV has become a popular leisure activity among school children. However, when asked about whether parents should limit the hours that children spend on it, people meet with a dilemma. According to my personal experiences, I hold the standpoint that watching too much TV or moviews could have adverse influence on children.
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On top of the first, children can be easily misled by the inappropriate contents on TV because of their psychological immaturity. Firstly, children can have convenient access to the violent scenes in some ‘Super Hero’ Hollywood movies. They have more chances to imitate the behaviours in the movies and to form the bad habit of using violence to deal with problems in their daily lives. Besides, there are also some pornographic plots on television programs, which will definitely leave unhealthy effects on children’s growth.
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What’s more, spending too much time on watching TV will absolutely account for children’s studying time. Those children will be unwilling to do school works. My sister is a case in point. She often spends at leat three hours on watching cartoons and movies per day even before her examinations. She has less time to finish her homework and review the texts. So she finally failed the college entrance examination. THus watching too much TV programs will adversely affect children’s studies.
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Finally, students who spend less time on watching TV will have more chances to stay with peers. They can share common interests and brilliant ideas with each other, which will be beneficial to their futures. On the other hand, those who always stay at home and watch TV will feel being isolated and lack the basic communicating skills.
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In conclusion, I should reinforce my viewpoint that parents should limit the time children spend on watching TV or movies.
No. | Phrases&Words | Meaning&Synonyms | Position | Odds |
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1 | dilemma | pp meet with a dilemma. | ||
2 | standpoint | hold ~ | ||
3 | too much | watching too much TV or moviews could have adverse influence on children. | ||
4 | be misled by | children can be easily misled by the inappropriate contents on TV | ||
5 | immaturity | psychological immaturity | ||
6 | convenient access | children can have ~ to the violent scences | ||
7 | imitate | they have more chances to ~ the behaviours in the movies and form the bad habit | ||
8 | the habit of | they may form the bad habit of using violence to deal with problems in their daily lives. | ||
9 | pornographic | there are also some pornographic plots on television programs. | ||
10 | account for | spending too much time on watching TV will absolutely ~ children’s studying time. | ||
11 | be unwilling to | Those children will be unwilling to do school works | ||
12 | cartoons & movies | she often spends at least three hours on watching ~ per day even before her examinations | ||
13 | the college entrance examination | |||
14 | stay with peers | |||
15 | be beneficial to |
#28 Advertising
29 Economic Progress
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’ progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important.
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There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a government with higher revenues can invest in the country’s transport network, its education system and its hospitals. Finally, a strong economy can help a country’s standing on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.
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However, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. For example, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents.
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In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
30 Traditional Culture
Task: Many customs and traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life and not worth keeping. Agree or disagree?
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A growing number of customs and traditional cultures have disappeared gradually, with the progress of our society. People, especially among teenagers, hold conflicting views about whether all these traditional norms should be inherited generation by generation. Personally, the valuable traditions our ancestors passed down to us, with no doubt, should be preserved.
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Preserving traditional culture is not equal to sacrificing modern conveniences, and there is no denying that respecting tradition is the prerequisite for future progress. Modern civilizations, admittedly, stand for the development of times. However, human beings are bound to learn valuable experience from what happened in the past. Accordingly, historical legacies should be at least equally crucial with the current cultures, if not more than. Undeniably, some conventional customs exert positive effects on the harmoniousness of families. Specifically, in the Spring festival, Chinese people will reunite together with their families no matter where they have worked, just for enjoying the sense of belongings. Moreover, the moral values and virtues passed on from our forefathers have the educational functions like teaching us how to be respectful to elders and responsible for your family and even the whole country.
However, some obsolete traditional culture dross which may impede the advancement of a nation do exist. For example, females would find it difficult to pursue a job and males would be laughed for staying at home looking after their children in the past decades. Thanks for the modern culture that advocates the equal rights between men and women. The labor market is full of the well-educated female workforce.
In conclusion, despite some outdated culture leftovers, stepping up efforts to preserve historical heritages which are, to some extent, on the verge of extinction, is extremely imperative. Modern culture, however, should coexist peacefully with traditions and not be neglected. (296 words)
# 31 Arts & Science
People still value artists in the age of advanced science and technology. What are the reasons? Are arts as important as science and technology?
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In the contemporary scientific community, many may wonder why there is still a high respect and regard for artists such as musician, painters and writers. In the essay, the significance of both art and science will be fully explored.
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Art is attached great importance in the era of science and technology thanks to its irreplaceable functions. Superficially, it is relaxing and refreshing to watch films on weekends, listen to concerts every three months and appreciate refined art such as operas and ballets whenever there is an opportunity. Profoundly, art promotes the advancement of science and technology. For example, Da Vinci’s paintings of the internal structure of human bodies laid the foundation of modern anatomy. Also, Jules Verne, the famous French writer in the 19 century, envisioned the possibility of submarines in the “Twenty Thousand Leagues under the Sea” and helicopters in the “The Clipper of the Clouds”
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Science and technology are of equal significance for human society. To be pragmatic, they raise productivity and satisfy basic human needs. For instance, it was not until the invention of Watt’s steam engine that the industries of metallurgy, coal mining and textile began to prosper. Besides, agriculture is now so mechanized that only about 2 percent of American workers make a living as farmers who can feed the whole country more than sufficient. What few realize is that science and technology also push the progress of art. Only after the law of visual stay was discovered was there the art of cartoon and animation and only after the invention of projectors was made was there the boom of silver screen
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In conclusion, art is as weighty as science and technology to human advancement and they actually complement and facilitate each other. Just as Flaubert says, art will be scientific while science will be artistic and they finally converge at the peak of the mountain of civilization.
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31 Advertisement
In some countries, advertisers increase the amount of advertising which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys,and other goods. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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People today are too often bombarded with various advertisements on television,in newspapers or on the running buses or subways, a large proportion of which are children targeted. although it can be argued that the information in a commercial is far from helpful, I believe that too much exposure to advertising imposes too much stress on children as well as their parents.
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Many advertisers may claim that the advertisements are full of useful information. This is true to a certain extent. In some cases, parents tend to choose the right quality products according to what a commercial introduces. these advertisements can provide potential customers with a comprehensive understanding of the products advertised, which can help consumers make well-informed buying decisions. For example, television advertisements can present goods in a visual and audio way, this can definitely enhance people’s knowledge of the advertised goods, especially some electronic toys or newly-introduced food.
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Nevertheless, in some others,quite the revers e is true. That is to say that the information in advertisements is far from helpful but rather harmful because almost kinds of advertising will definitely exaggerate their merits but conceal their demerits. Moreover, The advertisers usually have a deep insight into children’s psychology and behaviors which are taken into advantage of in their advertising to make their products. whether a toy, a snack or some other goods, more appealing to the young minds. As a result, the innocent young are very likely to fall prey to the predators and ask them parents to buy whatever is advertised, regardless of the price and the function.
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Overall, I believe that advertising marketed towards children should be strictly examined and controlled by the related authorities because children are the disadvantaged group of people and prone to any tricks and deceits. Also parents should be more discreet when choosing a product from advertisements.
- 32 festivals
Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Some people argue that we no longer remember the original meaning of festivals, and that most of us treat them as opportunities to have fun. While I agree that enjoyment seems to be the priority during festival times, I do not agree that people have forgotten what these festivals mean.
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On the one hand, religious and traditional festivals have certainly become times for celebration. In the UK, Christmas is a good example of a festival period when people are most concerned with shopping, giving and receiving presents, decorating their homes and enjoying traditional meals with their families. Most people look forward to Christmas as a holiday period, rather than a time to practise religion. Similar behaviour can be seen during non-religious festivals, such as Bonfire Night. People associate this occasion with making fires, watching firework displays, and perhaps going to large events in local parks; in other words, enjoyment is people’s primary goal.
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However, I disagree with the idea that the underlying meaning of such festivals has been forgotten. In UK primary schools, children learn in detail about the religious reasons for celebrating Christmas, Easter and a variety of festivals in other religions. For example, in late December, children sing Christmas songs which have a religious content, and they may even perform nativity plays telling the story of Jesus’ birth. Families also play a role in passing knowledge of religious festivals’ deeper significance on to the next generation. The same is true for festivals that have a historical background, such as Bonfire Night or Halloween, in the sense that people generally learn the stories behind these occasions at an early age.
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In conclusion, although people mainly want to enjoy themselves during festivals, I believe that they are still aware of the reasons for these celebrations.